Saturday, August 21, 2010

time remote by carl sommer

There was a boy named Christopher who had many dream. He would often look out the window and wish that he could be outside playing instead of studying. Next to Christopher lived a kind old inventor named Dr.Finkle. Christoper loved seeing Dr.Finkle doing his different project. One day Christopher ask Dr.Finkle what was he doing this time he said that he inventing a remote that speed time. Dr.Finkle said that he said that it cannot make time go backward he still working on it. Christoper thought he could use it to skip his homework. Dr.finkle said to Christoper that it was not meant to use to skip homework trouble it for special occasions . One day Dr.finkle said t hat he would be leaving town and asked christopher to feed the cat when he gone.After school christopher went to feed the cat as he was walking he saw the time remote he rushed to the time remote and took it Christopher went to the nearby park and make sure no one was seeing him before he use it. He used it because he wanted to skip his test. He dialed in 2 hour he push the button. he saw his watch was almost dinner time. he disliked what his mother cooked and use the time remote to skip time ,he went down and saw desert. he forgoted to study for his math test so he use the time remote to skip time. Christopher close his eyes and dialed more time than ever!. Christoper became 18 year old and he thought that school days are over he can get a job and do whatever he wanted.He quickly found a job working in the store his boss complained that he was daydreaming and making a mess of the can. He quited his job and was finding others.he tried to serch f or other job but could not find. No want would hire him beacuse he had not skill. he dialed in three year with hope. after a few day days he went to see the manger if he could work on the machine then sweeping the floor. his boss said that he have to take a math test brfore he could change job. he said never mind and went out.He keep using the time remote to skip time. meanwhile he got married and had a babbies boy. Whenever he became sick he would alaways the time remote. Christopher wish that he could become a kid again. With anger christopher threw the time remote into the water it smashed against a rock. he saw a red button and press it. suddenly he became a kid again he was very happy he saw his mon waving at him he ran home. Christopher went to his mon and dad and hug them.

7 comments:

  1. working in late night so tired it took me like 1hour

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  2. what the heck why write so long.

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  3. yo jordan it's good that you written so many words if i were the teacher i would give you a + +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ A

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  4. No No No!
    Teacher will cancel& cancel
    Until very less words haha
    This is the longest post in here!
    You have broke the record lol.

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